Roger Zelazny. A Rose for Ecclesiastes
I was busy translating one of my _Madrigals Macabre_ into Martian
on the morning I was found acceptable. The intercom had buzzed
briefly, and I dropped my pencil and flipped on the toggle in a single
"Mister G," piped Morton's youthful contralto, "the old man says I
should `get hold of that damned conceited rhymer` right away, and send
him to his cabin. Since there's only one damned conceited rhymer..."
"Let not ambition mock thy useful toil." I cut him off.
So, the Martians had finally made up their minds! I knocked an
inch and a half of ash from a smoldering butt, and took my first drag
since I had lit it. The entire month's anticipation tried hard to
crowd itself into the moment, but could not quite make it. I was
frightened to walk those forty feet and hear Emory say the words I
already knew he would say; and that feeling elbowed the other one into
So I finished the stanza I was translating before I got up.
It took only a moment to reach Emory's door. I knocked twice and
opened it, just as he growled, "Come in."
"You wanted to see me?" I sat down quickly to save him the
trouble of offering me a seat.
"That was fast. What did you do, run?"
I regarded his paternal discontent:
_Little fatty flecks beneath pale eyes, thinning hair, and an
Irish nose; a voice a decibel louder than anyone else's....._
Hamlet to Claudius: "I was working."
"Hah!" he snorted. "Come off it. No one's ever seen you do any
of that stuff."
I shrugged my shoulders and started to rise.
"If that's what you called me down here--"
He stood up. He walked around his desk. He hovered above me and
glared down. (A hard trick, even when I'm in a low chair.)
"You are undoubtably the most antagonistic bastard I've ever had
to work with!" he bellowed, like a belly-stung buffalo. "Why the hell
don't you act like a human being sometime and surprise everybody? I'm
willing to admit you're smart, maybe even a genius, but--oh, hell!" He
made a heaving gesture with both hands and walked back to his chair.
"Betty has finally talked them into letting you go in." His voice
was normal again. "They'll receive you this afternoon. Draw one of
the jeepsters after lunch, and get down there."
"Okay," I said.
"That's all, then."
I nodded, got to my feet. My hand was on the doorknob when he
"I don't have to tell you how important this is. Don't treat them
the way you treat us."
I closed the door behind me.
I don't remember what I had for lunch. I was nervous, but I knew
instinctively that I wouldn't muff it. My Boston publishers expected
a Martian Idyll, or at least a Saint-Exupery job on space flight. The
National Science Association wanted a complete report on the Rise and
Fall of the Martian Empire.
They would both be pleased. I knew.
That's the reason everyone is jealous--why they hate me. I always
come through, and I can come through better than anyone else.
I shoveled in a final anthill of slop, and made my way to our car
barn. I drew one jeepster and headed it toward Tirellian.
Flames of sand, lousy with iron oxide, set fire to the buggy.
They swarmed over the open top and bit through my scarf; they set to
work pitting my goggles.
The jeepster, swaying and panting like a little donkey I once rode
through the Himalayas, kept kicking me in the seat of the pants. The
Mountains of Tirellian shuffled their feet and moved toward me at a
Suddenly I was heading uphill, and I shifted gears to accommodate
the engine's braying. Not like Gobi, not like the Great Southwestern
Desert, I mused. Just red, just dead...without even a cactus.
I reached the crest of the hill, but I had raised too much dust to
see what was ahead. It didn't matter, though; I have a head full of
maps. I bore to the left and downhill, adjusting the throttle. A
crosswind and solid ground beat down the fires. I felt like Ulysses
in Malebolge--with a terza-rima speech in one hand and an eye out for
I rounded a rock pagoda and arrived.
Betty waved as I crunched to a halt, then jumped down.
"Hi," I choked, unwinding my scarf and shaking out a pound and a
half of grit. "Like, where do I go and who do I see?"
She permitted herself a brief Germanic giggle--more at my starting
a sentence with "like" than at my discomfort--then she started talking.
(She is a top linguist, so a word from the Village Idiom still tickles
I appreciate her precise, furry talk; informational, and all that.
I had enough in the way of social pleasantries before me to last at
least the rest of my life. I looked at her chocolate-bar eyes and
perfect teeth, at her sun-bleached hair, close-cropped to the head (I
hate blondes!), and decided that she was in love with me.
"Mr. Gallinger, the Matriarch is waiting inside for you to be
introduced. She has consented to open the Temple records for your
study." She paused here to pat her hair and squirm a little. Did my
gaze make her nervous?
"They are religious documents, as well as their only history," she
continued, "sort of like the Mahabharata. She expects you to observe
certain rituals in handling them, like repeating the sacred words when
you turn pages--she will teach you the system."
I nodded quickly, several times.
"Fine, let's go in."
"Uh--" She paused. "Do not forget their Eleven Forms of
Politeness and Degree. They take matters of form quite seriously--and
do not get into any discussions over the equality of the sexes--"
"I know all about their taboos," I broke in. "Don't worry. I've
lived in the Orient, remember?"
She dropped her eyes and seized my hand. I almost jerked it away.
"It will look better if I enter leading you."
I swallowed my comments, and followed her, like Samson in Gaza.
Inside, my last thought met with a strange correspondence. The
Matriarch's quarters were a rather abstract version of what I might
imagine the tents of the tribes of Israel to have been like.
Abstract, I say, because it was all frescoed brick, peaked like a huge
tent, with animal-skin representations like gray-blue scars, that
looked as if they had been laid on the walls with a palette knife.
The Matriarch, M'Cwyie, was short, white-haired, fifty-ish, and
dressed like a queen. With her rainbow of voluminous skirts she
looked like an inverted punch bowl set atop a cushion.
Accepting my obeisances, she regarded me as an owl might a rabbit.
The lids of those blank, black eyes jumped upwards as she discovered
my perfect accent. --The tape recorder Betty had carried on her
interviews had done its part, and I knew the language reports from the
first two expeditions, verbatim. I'm all hell when it comes to
picking up accents.
"You are the poet?"
"Yes," I replied.
"Recite one of your poems, please."
"I'm sorry, but nothing short of a thorough translating job would
do justice to your language and my poetry, and I don't know enough of
your language yet."
"But I've been making such translations for my own amusement, as
an exercise in grammar," I continued. "I'd be honored to bring a few
of them along one of the times that I come here."
"Yes. Do so."
Score one for me!
She turned to Betty.
"You may go now."
Betty muttered the parting formalities, gave me a strange sideways
look, and was gone. She apparently had expected to stay and "assist"
me. She wanted a piece of the glory, like everyone else. But I was
the Schliemann at this Troy, and there would be only one name on the
M'Cwyie rose, and I noticed that she gained very little height by
standing. But then I'm six-six and look like a poplar in October;
thin, bright red on top, and towering above everyone else.
"Our records are very, very old," she began. "Betty says that
your word for that age is `millennia.`"
I nodded appreciatively.
"I'm very anxious to see them."
"They are not here. We will have to go into the Temple--they may
not be removed."
I was suddenly wary.
"You have no objections to my copying them, do you?"
"No. I see that you respect them, or your desire would not be so
She seemed amused. I asked her what was so funny.
"The High Tongue may not be so easy for a foreigner to learn."
It came through fast.
No one on the first expedition had gotten this close. I had had
no way of knowing that this was a double-language deal--a classical as
well as a vulgar. I knew some of their Prakrit, now I had to learn
all their Sanskrit.
"Ouch, and damn!"
"It's non-translatable, M'Cwyie. But imagine yourself having to
learn the High Tongue in a hurry, and you can guess at the sentiment."
She seemed amused again, and told me to remove my shoes.
She guided me through an alcove...
...and into a burst of Byzantine brilliance!
No Earthman had ever been in this room before, or I would have heard
about it. Carter, the first expedition's linguist, with the help of
one Mary Allen, M.D., had learned all the grammar and vocabulary that
I knew while sitting cross-legged in the antechamber.
We had had no idea this existed. Greedily, I cast my eyes about.
A highly sophisticated system of esthetics lay behind the decor. We
would have to revise our entire estimation of Martian culture.
For one thing, the ceiling was vaulted and corbeled; for another,
there were side-columns with reverse flutings; for another--oh hell!
The place was big. Posh. You could never have guessed it from the
I bent forward to study the gilt filigree on a ceremonial table.
M'Cwyie seemed a bit smug at my intentness, but I'd still have hated
to play poker with her.
The table was loaded with books.
With my toe, I traced a mosaic on the floor.
"Is your entire city within this one building?"
"Yes, it goes far back into the mountain."
"I see," I said, seeing nothing.
I couldn't ask her for a conducted tour, yet.
She moved to a small stool by the table.
"Shall we begin your friendship with the High Tongue?"
I was trying to photograph the hall with my eyes, knowing I would
have to get a camera in here, somehow, sooner or later. I tore my
gaze from a statuette and nodded, hard.
"Yes, introduce me."
I sat down.
For the next three weeks alphabet-bugs chased each other behind my
eyelids whenever I tried to sleep. The sky was an unclouded pool of
turquoise that rippled calligraphies whenever I swept my eyes across
it. I drank quarts of coffee while I worked and mixed cocktails of
Benzedrine and champagne for my coffee breaks.
M'Cwyie tutored me two hours every morning, and occasionally for
another two in the evening. I spent an additional fourteen hours a
day on my own, once I had gotten up sufficient momentum to go ahead
And at night the elevator of time dropped me to its bottom
I was six again, learning my Hebrew, Greek, Latin, and Aramaic. I was
ten, sneaking peeks at the _Iliad_. When Daddy wasn't spreading
hellfire brimstone, and brotherly love, he was teaching me to dig the
Word, like in the original.
Lord! There are so many originals and so _many_ words! When I
was twelve I started pointing out the little differences between what
he was preaching and what I was reading.
The fundamentalist vigor of his reply brooked no debate. It was
worse than any beating. I kept my mouth shut after that and learned
to appreciate Old Testament poetry.
_--Lord, I am sorry! Daddy--Sir--I am sorry! --It couldn't be! It
On the day the boy graduated from high school, with the French,
German, Spanish, and Latin awards, Dad Gallinger had told his
fourteen-year old, six-foot scarecrow of a son that he wanted him to
enter the ministry. I remember how his son was evasive:
"Sir," he had said, "I'd sort of like to study on my own for a
year or so, and then take pre-theology courses at some liberal arts
university. I feel I'm still sort of young to try a seminary,
The Voice of God: "But you have the gift of tongues, my son. You
can preach the Gospel in all the lands of Babel. You were born to be
a missionary. You say you are young, but time is rushing by you like
a whirlwind. Start early, and you will enjoy added years of service."
The added years of service were so many added tails to the cat
repeatedly laid on my back. I can't see his face now; I never can.
Maybe it was because I was always afraid to look at it then.
And years later, when he was dead, and laid out, in black, amidst
bouquets, amidst weeping congregationalists, amidst prayers, red
faces, handkerchiefs, hands patting your shoulders, solemn faced
comforters...I looked at him and did not recognize him.
We had met nine months before my birth, this stranger and I. He
had never been cruel--stern, demanding, with contempt for everyone's
shortcomings--but never cruel. He was also all that I had had of a
mother. And brothers. And sisters. He had tolerated my three years
at St. John's, possibly because of its name, never knowing how liberal
and delightful a place it really was.
But I never knew him, and the man atop the catafalque demanded
nothing now; I was free not to preach the Word. But now I wanted to,
in a different way. I wanted to preach a word that I never could have
voiced while he lived.
I did not return for my senior year in the fall. I had a small
inheritance coming, and a bit of trouble getting control of it, since
I was still under eighteen. But I managed.
It was Greenwich Village I finally settled upon.
Not telling any well-meaning parishioners my new address, I
entered into a daily routine of writing poetry and teaching myself
Japanese and Hindustani. I grew a fiery beard, drank espresso, and
learned to play chess. I wanted to try a couple of the other paths to
After that, it was two years in India with the Old Peace
Corps--which broke me of my Buddhism, and gave me my _Pipes of Krishna_
lyrics and the Pulitzer they deserved.
Then back to the States for my degree, grad work in linguistics,
and more prizes.
Then one day a ship went to Mars. The vessel settling in its New
Mexico nest of fires contained a new language. --It was fantastic,
exotic, and esthetically overpowering. After I had learned all there
was to know about it, and written my book, I was famous in new
"Go, Gallinger. Dip your bucket in the well, and bring us a drink
of Mars. Go, learn another world--but remain aloof, rail at it gently
like Auden--and hand us its soul in iambics.
And I came to the land where the sun is a tarnished penny, where
the wind is a whip, where two moons play at hot rod games, and a hell
of sand gives you incendiary itches whenever you look at it.
I rose from my twisting on the bunk and crossed the darkened cabin to
a port. The desert was a carpet of endless orange, bulging from the
sweepings of centuries beneath it.
"I am a stranger, unafraid--This is the land--I've got it made!"
I had the High Tongue by the tail already--or the roots, if you
want your puns anatomical, as well as correct.
The High and Low tongues were not so dissimilar as they had first
seemed. I had enough of the one to get me through the murkier parts
of the other. I had the grammar and all the commoner irregular verbs
down cold; the dictionary I was constructing grew by the day, like a
tulip, and would bloom shortly. Every time I played the tapes the
Now was the time to tax my ingenuity, to really drive the lessons
home. I had purposely refrained from plunging into the major texts
until I could do justice to them. I had been reading minor
commentaries, bits of verse, fragments of history. And one thing had
impressed me strongly in all that I read.
They wrote about concrete things: rock, sand, water, winds; and
the tenor couched within these elemental symbols was fiercely
pessimistic. It reminded me of some Buddhists texts, but even more
so, I realized from my recent _recherches_, it was like parts of the
Old Testament. Specifically, it reminded me of the Book of
That, then, would be it. The sentiment, as well as the
vocabulary, was so similar that it would be a perfect exercise. Like
putting Poe into French. I would never be a convert to the Way of
Malann, but I would show them that an Earthman had once thought the
same thoughts, felt similarly.
I switched on my desk lamp and sought King James amidst my books.
_Vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all
if vanity. What profit hath a man..._
My progress seemed to startle M'Cwyie. She peered at me, like
Sartre's Other, across the tabletop. I ran through a chapter in the
Book of Locar. I didn't look up, but I could feel the tight net her
eyes were working about my head, shoulders, and rapid hands. I turned
Was she weighing the net, judging the size of the catch? And what
for? The books said nothing of fishers on Mars. Especially of men.
They said that some god named Malann had spat, or had done something
disgusting (depending on the version you read), and that life had
gotten underway as a disease in inorganic matter. They said that
movement was its first law, its first law, and that the dance was the
only legitimate reply to the inorganic...the dance's quality its
justification,--fication...and love is a disease in organic
I shook my head. I had almost been asleep.
I stood and stretched. Her eyes outlined me greedily now. So I
met them, and they dropped.
"I grow tired. I want to rest for awhile. I didn't sleep much
She nodded, Earth's shorthand for "yes," as she had learned from
"You wish to relax, and see the explicitness of the doctrine of
Locar in its fullness?"
"You wish to see a Dance of Locar?"
"Oh." Their damned circuits of form and periphrasis here ran
worse than the Korean! "Yes. Surely. Any time it's going to be done
I'd be happy to watch."
I continued, "In the meantime, I've been meaning to ask you
whether I might take some pictures-"
"Now is the time. Sit down. Rest. I will call the musicians."
She bustled out through a door I had never been past.
Well now, the dance was the highest art, according to Locar, not
to mention Havelock Ellis, and I was about to see how their
centuries-dead philosopher felt it should be conducted. I rubbed my
eyes and snapped over, touching my toes a few times.
The blood began pounding in my head, and I sucked in a couple deep
breaths. I bent again and there was a flurry of motion at the door.
To the trio who entered with M'Cwyie I must have looked as if I
were searching for the marbles I had just lost, bent over like that.
I grinned weakly and straightened up, my face red from more than
exertion. I hadn't expected them _that_ quickly.
Suddenly I thought of Havelock Ellis again in his area of greatest
The little redheaded doll, wearing, sari-like, a diaphanous piece
of the Martian sky, looked up in wonder--as a child at some colorful
flag on a high pole.
"Hello," I said, or its equivalent.
She bowed before replying. Evidently I had been promoted in
"I shall dance," said the red wound in that pale, pale cameo, her
face. Eyes, the color of dream and her dress, pulled away from mine.
She drifted to the center of the room.
Standing there, like a figure in an Etruscan frieze, she was
either meditating or regarding the design on the floor.
Was the mosaic symbolic of something? I studied it. If it was,
it eluded me; it would make an attractive bathroom floor or patio, but
I couldn't see much in it beyond that.
The other two were paint-spattered sparrows like M'Cwyie, in their
middle years. One settled to the floor with a triple-stringed
instrument faintly resembling a _samisen_. The other held a simple
woodblock and two drumsticks.
M'Cwyie disdained her stool and was seated upon the floor before I
realized it. I followed suit.
The _samisen_ player was still tuning it up, so I leaned toward
"What is the dancer's name?"
"Braxa," she replied, without looking at me, and raised her left
hand, slowly, which meant yes, and go ahead, and let it begin.
The stringed-thing throbbed like a toothache, and a tick-tocking,
like ghosts of all the clocks they had never invented, sprang from the
Braxa was a statue, both hands raised to her face, elbows high and
The music became a metaphor for fire.
_Crackle, purr, snap..._
She did not move.
The hissing altered to splashes. The cadence slowed. It was
water now, the most precious thing in the world, gurgling clear then
green over mossy rocks.
Still she did not move.
Glissandos. A pause.
Then, so faint I could hardly be sure at first, the tremble of
winds began. Softly, gently, sighing and halting, uncertain. A
pause, a sob, then a repetition of the first statement, only louder,
Were my eyes completely bugged from my reading, or was Braxa
actually trembling, all over, head to foot.
She began a microscopic swaying. A fraction of an inch right,
then left. Her fingers opened like the petals of a flower, and I
could see that her eyes were closed.
Her eyes opened. They were distant, glassy, looking through me
and the walls. Her swaying became more pronounced, merged with the
_The wind was sweeping in from the desert now, falling against
Tirellian like waves on a dike._ Her fingers moved, they were the
gusts. Her arms, slow pendulums, descended, began a counter-movement.
_The gale was coming now._ She began an axial movement and her
hands caught up with the rest of her body, only now her shoulders
commenced to writhe out a figure-eight.
_The wind! The wind, I say. O wild, enigmatic! O muse of St.
The cyclone was twisting around those eyes, its still center. Her
head was thrown back, but I knew there was no ceiling between her
gaze, passive as Buddha's, and the unchanging skies. Only the two
moons, perhaps, interrupted their slumber in that elemental Nirvana of
Years ago, I had seen the Devadasis is India, the street-dancers,
spinning their colorful webs, drawing in the male insect. But Braxa
was more than this: she was a Ramadjany, like those votaries of Rama,
incarnation of Vishnu, who had given the dance to man: the sacred
The clicking was monotonously steady now; the whine of the strings
made me think of the stinging rays of the sun, their heat stolen by
the wind's halations; the blue was Sarasvati and Mary, and a girl
named Laura. I heard a sitar from somewhere, watched this statue come
to life, and inhaled a divine afflatus.
I was again Rimbaud with his hashish, Baudelaire with his
laudanum, Poe, De Quincy, Wilde, Mallarme and Aleister Crowley. I
was, for a fleeting second, my father in his dark pulpit and darker
suit, the hymns and the organ's wheeze transmuted to bright wind.
She was a spun weather vane, a feathered crucifix hovering in the
air. a clothes-line holding one bright garment lashed parallel to the
ground. Her shoulder was bare now, and her right breast moved up and
down like a moon in the sky, its red nipple appearing momentarily
above a fold and vanishing again. The music was as formal as Job's
argument with God. Her dance was God's reply.
The music slowed, settled; it had been met, matched, answered.
Her garment, as if alive, crept back into the more sedate folds it
She dropped low, lower, to the floor. Her head fell upon her
raised knees. She did not move.
There was silence.
I realized, from the ache across my shoulders, how tensely I had been
sitting. My armpits were wet. Rivulets had been running down my
sides. What did one do now? Applaud?
I sought M'Cwyie from the corner of my eye. She raised her right
As if by telepathy the girl shuddered all over and stood. The
musicians also rose. So did M'Cwyie.
I got to my feet, with a Charley Horse in my left leg, and said,
"It was beautiful," inane as that sounds.
I received three different High Forms of "thank you."
There was a flurry of color and I was alone again with M'Cwyie.
"That is the one hundred-seventeenth of the two thousand, two
hundred-twenty-four danced of Locar."
I looked down at her.
"Whether Locar was right or wrong, he worked out a fine reply to
"Are the dances of your world like this?"
"Some of them are similar. I was reminded of them as I watched
Braxa-but I've never seen anything exactly like hers."
"She is good," M'Cwyie said. "She knows all the dances."
A hint of her earlier expression which had troubled me...
It was gone in an instant.
"I must tend my duties now." She moved to the table and closed
the books. "M'narra."
"Good-bye." I slipped into my boots.
I walked out the door, mounted the jeepster, and roared across the
evening into night, my wings of risen desert flapping slowly behind
I had just closed the door behind Betty, after a brief grammar
session, when I heard the voices in the hall. My vent was opened a
fraction, so I stood there and eavesdropped;
Morton's fruity treble: "Guess what? He said `hello' to me awhile
"Hmmph!" Emory's elephant lungs exploded. "Either he's slipping,
or you were standing in his way and he wanted you to move."
"Probably didn't recognize me. I don't think he sleeps any more,
now he has that language to play with. I had night watch last week,
and every night I passed his door at 0300--I always heard that recorder
going. At 0500 when I got off, he was still at it."
"The guy _is_ working hard," Emory admitted, grudgingly. "In
fact, I think he's taking some kind of dope to keep awake. He looks
sort of glassy-eyed these days. Maybe that's natural for a poet,
Betty had been standing there, because she broke in then:
"Regardless of what you think of him, it's going to take me at
least a year to learn what he's picked up in three weeks. And I'm
just a linguist, not a poet."
Morton must have been nursing a crush on her bovine charms. It's
the only reason I can think of for his dropping his guns to say what
"I took a course in modern poetry when I was back at the
university," he began. "We read six authors--Yeats, Pound, Eliot,
Crane, Stevens, and Gallinger--and on the last day of the semester,
when the prof was feeling a little rhetorical, he said, `These six
names are written on the century, and all the gates of criticism and
hell shall not prevail on them.'
"Myself," he continued, "I thought his _Pipes of Krishna_ and his
_Madrigals_ were great. I was honored to be chosen for an expedition
he was going on.
"I think he's spoken two dozen words to me since I met him," he
The Defense: "Did it ever occur to you," Betty said, "that he
might be tremendously self-conscious about his appearance? He was
also a precocious child, and probably never even had school friends.
He's sensitive and very introverted."
"Sensitive? Self-conscious?" Emory choked and gagged. "The man
is as proud as Lucifer, and he's a walking insult machine. You press
a button like `Hello' or `Nice day' and he thumbs his nose at you.
He's got it down to a reflex."
They muttered a few other pleasantries and drifted away.
Well bless you, Morton boy. You little pimple-faced, Ivy-bred
connoisseur! I've never taken a course in my poetry, but I'm glad
someone said that. The Gates of Hell. Well now! Maybe Daddy's
prayers got heard somewhere, and I am a missionary, after all!
...Only a missionary needs something to convert people _to_. I
have my private system of esthetics, and I suppose it oozes an ethical
by-product somewhere. But if I ever had anything to preach, really,
even in my poems, I wouldn't care to preach it to such low-lifes as
you. If you think I'm a slob, I'm also a snob, and there's no room
for you in my Heaven--it's a private place, where Swift, Shaw, and
Petronius Arbiter come to dinner.
And oh, the feasts we have! The Trimalchio's, the Emory's we
We finish you with the soup, Morton!
I turned and settled at my desk. I wanted to write something.
Ecclesiastes could take a night off. I wanted to write a poem, a poem
about the one hundred-seventeenth dance of Locar; about a rose
following the light, traced by the wind, sick, like Blake's rose,
I found a pencil and began.
When I had finished I was pleased. It wasn't great--at least, it
was no greater than it needed to be--High Martian not being my
strongest tongue. I groped, and put it into English, with partial
rhymes. Maybe I'd stick it in my next book. I called it _Braxa:_
_In a land of wind and red, where the icy evening of Time
freezes milk in the breasts of Life, as two moons overhead--
cat and dog in alleyways of dream--scratch and scramble
agelessly my flight...
This final flower turns a burning head._
I put it away and found some phenobarbitol. I was suddenly tired.
When I showed my poem to M'Cwyie the next day, she read it through
several times, very slowly.
"It is lovely," she said. "But you used three words from your own
language. `Cat' and `dog', I assume, are two small animals with a
hereditary hatred for one another. But what is `flower'?"
"Oh," I said. "I've never come across your word for `flower', but
I was actually thinking of an Earth flower, the rose."
"What is it like?"
"Well, its petals are generally bright red. That's what I meant,
on one level, by `burning heads.' I also wanted it to imply fever,
though, and red hair, and the fire of life. The rose, itself, has a
thorny stem, green leaves, and a distinct, pleasing aroma."
"I wish I could see one."
"I suppose it could be arranged. I'll check."
"Do it, please. You are a--" She used the word for "prophet," or
religious poet, like Isaias or Locar. "--and your poem is inspired. I
shall tell Braxa of it."
I declined the nomination, but felt flattered.
This, then, I decided, was the strategic day, the day on which to
ask whether I might bring in the microfilm machine and the camera. I
wanted to copy all their texts, I explained, and I couldn't write fast
enough to do it.
She surprised me by agreeing immediately. But she bowled me over
with her invitation.
"Would you like to come and stay here while you do this thing?
Then you can work day and night, any time you want--except when the
Temple is being used, of course."
"I should be honored."
"Good. Bring your machines when you want, and I will show you a
"Will this afternoon be all right?"
"Then I will go now and get things ready. Until this
I anticipated a little trouble from Emory, but not much. Everyone
back at the ship was anxious to see the Martians, poke needles in the
Martians, ask them about Martian climate, diseases, soil chemistry,
politics, and mushrooms (our botanist was a fungus nut, but a
reasonably good guy)--and only four or five had actually gotten to see
them. The crew had been spending most of its time excavating dead
cities and their acropolises. We played the game by strict rules, and
the natives were as fiercely insular as the nineteenth-century
Japanese. I figured I would meet with little resistance, and I
In fact, I got the distinct impression that everyone was happy to
see me move out.
I stopped in the hydroponics room to speak with our mushroom
"Hi, Kane. Grow any toadstools in the sand yet?"
He sniffed. He always sniffs. Maybe he's allergic to plants.
"Hello, Gallinger. No, I haven't had any success with toadstools,
but look behind the car barn next time you're out there. I've got a
few cacti going."
"Great," I observed. Doc Kane was about my only friend aboard,
not counting Betty.
"Say, I came down to ask you a favor."
"I want a rose."
"A rose. You know, a nice red American Beauty job--thorns, pretty
"I don't think it will take in this soil. _Sniff, sniff._"
"No, you don't understand. I don't want to plant it, I just want
"I'd have to use the tanks." He scratched his hairless dome. "It
would take at least three months to get you flowers, even under forced
"Will you do it?"
"Sure, if you don't mind the wait."
"Not at all. In fact, three months will just make it before we
leave." I looked about at the pools of crawling slime, at the trays
of shoots. "--I'm moving up to Tirellian today, but I'll be in and out
all the time. I'll be here when it blooms."
"Moving up there, eh? Moore said they're an in-group."
"I guess I'm `in' then."
"Looks that way--I still don't see how you learned their language,
though. Of course, I had trouble with French and German for my Ph.D,
but last week I heard Betty demonstrate it at lunch. It just sounds
like a lot of weird noises. She says speaking it is like working a
_Times_ crossword and trying to imitate birdcalls at the same time."
I laughed, and took the cigarette he offered me.
"It's complicated," I acknowledged. "But, well, it's as if you
suddenly came across a whole new class of mycetae here--you'd dream
about it at night."
His eyes were gleaming.
"Wouldn't that be something! I might, yet, you know."
"Maybe you will."
He chuckled as we walked to the door.
"I'll start your roses tonight. Take it easy down there."
"You bet. Thanks."
Like I said, a fungus nut, but a fairly good guy.
My quarters in the Citadel of Tirellian were directly adjacent to the
Temple, on the inward side and slightly to the left. They were a
considerable improvement over my cramped cabin, and I was pleased that
Martian culture had progressed sufficiently to discover the
desirability of the mattress over the pallet. Also, the bed was long
enough to accommodate me, which was surprising.
So I unpacked and took sixteen 35 mm. shots of the Temple, before
starting on the books.
I took 'stats until I was sick of turning pages without knowing
what they said. So I started translating a work of history.
"Lo. In the thirty-seventh year of the Process of Cillen the rains
came, which gave way to rejoicing, for it was a rare and untoward
occurrence, and commonly construed a blessing.
"But it was not the life-giving semen of Malann which fell from
the heavens. It was the blood of the universe, spurting from an
artery. And the last days were upon us. The final dance was to
"The rains brought the plague that does not kill, and the last
passes of Locar began with their drumming...."
I asked myself what the hell Tamur meant, for he was an historian
and supposedly committed to fact. This was not their Apocalypse.
Unless they could be one and the same...?
Why not? I mused. Tirellian's handful of people were the remnant
of what had obviously once been a highly developed culture. They had
had wars, but no holocausts; science, but little technology. A
plague, a plague that did not kill...? Could that have done it? How,
if it wasn't fatal?
I read on, but the nature of the plague was not discussed. I
turned pages, skipped ahead, and drew a blank.
_M'Cwyie! M'Cwyie! When I want to question you most, you are not
Would it be a _faux pas_ to go looking for her? Yes, I decided.
I was restricted to the rooms I had been shown, that had been an
implicit understanding. I would have to wait to find out.
So I cursed long and loud, in many languages, doubtless burning
Malann's sacred ears, there in his Temple.
He did not see fit to strike me dead, so I decided to call it a
day and hit the sack.
I must have been asleep for several hours when Braxa entered my room
with a tiny lamp. She dragged me awake by tugging at my pajama
I said hello. Thinking back, there is not much else I could have
"I have come," she said, "to hear the poem."
I yawned, sat up, and did things people usually do when awakened
in the middle of the night to read poetry.
"That is very kind of you, but isn't the hour a trifle awkward?"
"I don't mind," she said.
Someday I am going to write an article for the _Journal of
Semantics_, called "Tone of Voice: An Insufficient Vehicle for Irony."
However, I was awake, so I grabbed my robe.
"What sort of animal is that? she asked, pointing at the silk
dragon on my lapel.
"Mythical," I replied. "Now look, it's late. I am tired. I have
much to do in the morning. And M'Cwyie just might get the wrong idea
if she learns you were here."
"You know damned well what I mean!" It was the first time I had
had an opportunity to use Martian profanity, and it failed.
"No," she said, "I do not know."
She seemed frightened, like a puppy dog being scolded without
knowing what it has done wrong.
I softened. Her red cloak matched her hair and lips so perfectly,
and those lips were trembling.
"Here now, I didn't mean to upset you. On my world there are
certain, uh, mores, concerning people of different sex alone together
in bedrooms, and not allied by marriage....Um, I mean, you see what I
They were jade, her eyes.
"Well, it's sort of...Well, it's sex, that's what it is."
A light was switched on in those jade eyes.
"Oh, you mean having children!"
"Yes. That's it! Exactly!"
She laughed. It was the first time I had heard laughter in
Tirellian. It sounded like a violinist striking his high strings with
the bow, in short little chops. It was not an altogether pleasant
thing to hear, especially because she laughed too long.
When she had finished she moved closer.
"I remember, now," she said. "We used to have such rules. Half a
Process ago, when I was a child, we had such rules. But--" she looked
as if she were ready to laugh again--"there is no need for them now."
My mind moved like a tape recorder playing at triple speed.
Half a Process! HalfaProcessa--ProcessaProcess! No! Yes! Half a
Process was two hundred-forty-three years, roughly speaking!
--Time enough to learn the 2224 dances of Locar.
--Time enough to grow old, if you were human.
--Earth-style human, I mean.
I looked at her again, pale as the white queen in an ivory chess
She was human, I'd stake my soul--alive, normal, healthy. I'd
stake my life--woman, my body...
But she was two and a half centuries old, which made M'Cwyie
Methusala's grandma. It flattered me to think of their repeated
complimenting of my skills, as linguist, as poet. These superior
But what did she mean "there is no such need for them now"? Why
the near-hysteria? Why all those funny looks I'd been getting from
I suddenly knew I was close to something important, besides a
"Tell me," I said, in my Casual Voice, "did it have anything to do
with `the plague that does not kill,' of which Tamur wrote?"
"Yes," she replied, "the children born after the Rains could have
no children of their own, and--"
"And what?" I was leaning forward, memory set at "record."
"--and the men had no desire to get any."
I sagged backward against the bedpost. Racial sterility,
masculine impotence, following phenomenal weather. Had some vagabond
cloud of radioactive junk from God knows where penetrated their weak
atmosphere one day? One day long before Shiaparelli saw the canals,
mythical as my dragon, before those "canals" had given rise to some
correct guesses for all the wrong reasons, had Braxa been alive,
dancing, here--damned in the womb since blind Milton had written of
another paradise, equally lost?
I found a cigarette. Good thing I had thought to bring ashtrays.
Mars had never had a tobacco industry either. Or booze. The ascetics
I had met in India had been Dionysiac compared to this.
"What is that tube of fire?"
"A cigarette. Want one?"
She sat beside me, and I lighted it for her.
"It irritates the nose."
"Yes. Draw some into your lungs, hold it there, and exhale."
A moment passed.
"Ooh," she said.
A pause, then, "Is it sacred?"
"No, it's nicotine," I answered, "a very _ersatz_ form of
"Please don't ask me to translate `ersatz'."
"I won't. I get this feeling sometimes when I dance."
"It will pass in a moment."
"Tell me your poem now."
An idea hit me.
"Wait a minute," I said. "I may have something better."
I got up and rummaged through my notebooks, then I returned and
sat beside her.
"These are the first three chapters of the Book of Ecclesiastes,"
I explained. "It is very similar to your own sacred books."
I started reading.
I got through eleven verses before she cried out, "Please don't
read that! Tell me one of yours!"
I stopped and tossed the notebook onto a nearby table. She was
shaking, not as she had quivered that day she danced as the wind, but
with the jitter of unshed tears. She held her cigarette awkwardly,
like a pencil. Clumsily, I put my arm about her shoulders.
"He is so sad," she said, "like all the others."
So I twisted my mind like a bright ribbon, folded it, and tied the
crazy Christmas knots I love so well. From German to Martian, with
love, I did an impromptu paraphrasal of a poem about a Spanish dancer.
I thought it would please her. I was right.
"Ooh," she said again. "Did you write that?"
"No, it's by a better man than I."
"I don't believe it. You wrote it yourself."
"No, a man named Rilke did."
"But you brought it across to my language. Light another match,
so I can see how she danced."
"The fires of forever," she mused, "and she stamped them out,
`with small, firm feet.' I wish I could dance like that."
"You're better than any Gypsy," I laughed, blowing it out.
"No, I'm not. I couldn't do that."
"Do you want me to dance for you?"
Her cigarette was burning down, so I removed it from her fingers
and put it out, along with my own.
"No," I said. "Go to bed."
She smiled, and before I realized it, had unclasped the fold of
red at her shoulder.
And everything fell away.
And I swallowed, with some difficulty.
"All right," she said.
So I kissed her, as the breath of fallen cloth extinguished the
The days were like Shelley's leaves: yellow, red, brown, whipped
in bright gusts by the west wind. They swirled past me with the
rattle of microfilm. Almost all of the books were recorded now. It
would take scholars years to get through them, to properly assess
their value. Mars was locked in my desk.
Ecclesiastes, abandoned and returned to a dozen times, was almost
ready to speak in the High Tongue.
I whistled when I wasn't in the Temple. I wrote reams of poetry I
would have been ashamed of before. Evenings I would walk with Braxa,
across the dunes or up into the mountains. Sometimes she would dance
for me; and I would read something long, and in dactylic hexameter.
She still thought I was Rilke, and I almost kidded myself into
believing it. Here I was, staying at the Caste Duino, writing his
_...It is strange to inhabit the Earth no more,
to use no longer customs scarce acquired,
nor interpret roses..._
No! Never interpret roses! Don't. Smell them (sniff, Kane!),
pick them, enjoy them. Live in the moment. Hold to it tightly. but
charge not the gods to explain. So fast the leaves go by, are
And no one ever noticed us. Or cared.
Laura. Laura and Braxa. They rhyme, you know, with a bit of
clash. Tall, cool, and blonde was she (I hate blondes!), and Daddy
had turned me inside out, like a pocket, and I thought she could fill
me again. But the big, beat work-slinger, with Judas-beard and
dog-trust in his eyes, oh, he had been a fine decoration at her
parties. And that was all.
How the machine cursed me in the Temple! It blasphemed Malann and
Gallinger. And the wild west wind went by and something was not far
The last days were upon us.
A day went by and I did not see Braxa, and a night.
And a second. And a third.
I was half-mad. I hadn't realized how close we had become, how
important she had been. With the dumb assurance of presence, I had
fought against questioning the roses.
I had to ask. I didn't want to, but I had no choice.
"Where is she, M'Cwyie? Where is Braxa?"
"She is gone," she said.
"I do not know."
I looked at those devil-bird eyes. Anathema maranatha rose to my
"I must know."
She looked through me.
"She has left us. She is gone. Up into the hills, I suppose. Or
the desert. It does not matter. What does anything matter? The
dance draws itself to a close. The Temple will soon be empty."
"Why? Why did she leave?"
"I do not know."
"I must see her again. We lift off in a matter of days."
"I am sorry, Gallinger."
"So am I," I said, and slammed shut a book without saying
I stood up.
"I will find her."
I left the Temple. M'Cwyie was a seated statue. My boots were
still where I had left them.
All day I roared up and down the dunes, going nowhere. To the crew of
the _Aspic_ I must have looked like a sandstorm, all by myself.
Finally, I had to return for more fuel.
Emory came stalking out.
"Okay, make it good. You look like the abominable dust man. Why
"Why, I, uh, lost something."
"In the middle of the desert? Was it one of your sonnets?
They're the only thing I can think of that you'd make such a fuss
"No, dammit! It was something personal."
George had finished filling the tank. I started to mount the
"Hold on there!" he grabbed my arm.
"You're not going back until you tell me what this is all about."
I could have broken his grip, but then he could order me dragged
back by the heels, and quite a few people would enjoy doing the
dragging. So I forced myself to speak slowly, softly:
"It's simply that I lost my watch. My mother gave it to me and
it's a family heirloom. I want to find it before we leave."
"You sure it's not in your cabin, or down in Tirellian?"
"I've already checked."
"Maybe somebody hid it to irritate you. You know you're not the
most popular guy around."
I shook my head.
"I thought of that. But I always carry it in my right pocket. I
think it might have bounced out going over the dunes."
He narrowed his eyes.
"I remember reading on a book jacket that your mother died when
you were born."
"That's right," I said, biting my tongue. "The watch belonged to
her father and she wanted me to have it. My father kept it for me."
"Hmph!" he snorted. "That's a pretty strange way to look for a
watch, riding up and down in a jeepster."
"I could see the light shining off it that way," I offered,
"Well, it's starting to get dark," he observed. "No sense looking
any more today.
"Throw a dust sheet over the jeepster," he directed a mechanic.
He patted my arm.
"Come on in and get a shower, and something to eat. You look as
if you could use both."
_Little fatty flecks beneath pale eyes, thinning hair, and an
Irish nose; a voice a decibel louder than anyone else's..._
His only qualification for leadership!
I stood there, hating him. Claudius! If only this were the fifth
But suddenly the idea of a shower, and food, came through to me.
I could use both badly. If I insisted on hurrying back immediately I
might arouse more suspicion.
So I brushed some sand from my sleeve.
"You're right. That sounds like a good idea."
"Come on, we'll eat in my cabin."
The shower was a blessing, clean khakis were the grace of God,
and the food smelled like Heaven.
"Smells pretty good," I said.
We hacked up our steaks in silence. When we got to the dessert
and coffee he suggested:
"Why don't you take the night off? Stay here and get some sleep."
I shook my head.
"I'm pretty busy. Finishing up. There's not much time left."
"A couple of days ago you said you were almost finished."
"Almost, but not quite."
"You also said they're be holding a service in the Temple
"That's right. I'm going to work in my room."
He shrugged his shoulders.
Finally, he said, "Gallinger," and I looked up because my name
"It shouldn't be any of my business," he said, "but it is. Betty
says you have a girl down there."
There was no question mark. It was a statement hanging in the
_Betty, you're a bitch. You're a cow and a bitch. And a jealous
one, at that. Why didn't you keep your nose where it belonged, shut
your eyes? You mouth?_
"So?" I said, a statement with a question mark.
"So," he answered it, "it is my duty, as head of this expedition,
to see that relations with the natives are carried on in a friendly,
and diplomatic, manner."
"You speak of them," I said, "as though they are aborigines.
Nothing could be further from the truth."
"When my papers are published everyone on Earth will know that
truth. I'll tell them things Doctor Moore never even guessed at.
I'll tell the tragedy of a doomed race, waiting for death, resigned
and disinterested. I'll write about it, and they will give me more
prizes, and this time I won't want them.
"My God!" I exclaimed. "They had a culture when our ancestors
were clubbing the saber-tooth and finding out how fire works!"
"_Do_ you have a girl down there?"
"Yes!" I said. Yes, _Claudius! Yes, Daddy! Yes, Emory!_ "I do.
but I'm going to let you in on a scholarly scoop now. They're already
dead. They're sterile. In one more generation there won't be any
I paused, then added, "Except in my papers, except on a few pieces
of microfilm and tape. And in some poems, about a girl who did give a
damn and could only bitch about the unfairness of it all by dancing."
"Oh," he said.
"You _have_ been behaving differently these past couple months.
You've even been downright civil on occasion, you know. I couldn't
help wondering what was happening. I didn't know anything mattered
that strongly to you."
I bowed my head.
"Is she the reason you were racing around the desert?"
I looked up.
"Because she's out there, somewhere. I don't know where, or why.
And I've got to find her before we go."
"Oh," he said again.
Then he leaned back, opened a drawer, and took out something
wrapped in a towel. He unwound it. A framed photo of a woman lay on
"My wife," he said.
It was an attractive face, with big, almond eyes.
"I'm a Navy man, you know," he began. "Young officer once. Met
her in Japan."
"Where I come from it wasn't considered right to marry into
another race, so we never did. But she was my wife. When she died I
was on the other side of the world. They took my children, and I've
never seen them since. I couldn't learn what orphanage, what home,
they were put into. That was long ago. Very few people know about
"I'm sorry," I said.
"Don't be. Forget it. But"--he shifted in his chair and looked at
me--"if you do want to take her back with you--do it. It'll mean my
neck, but I'm too old to ever head another expedition like this one.
So go ahead."
He gulped cold coffee.
"Get your jeepster."
He swiveled the chair around.
I tried to say "thank you" twice, but I couldn't. So I got up and
"Sayonara, and all that," he muttered behind me.
"Here it is, Gallinger!" I heard a shout.
I turned on my heel and looked back up the ramp.
He was limned in the port, shadow against light, but I had heard
I returned the few steps.
"Here what is?"
He produced a plastic container, divided internally. The lower
half was filled with liquid. The stem ran down into it. The other
half, a glass of claret in this horrible night, was a large, newly
"Thank you," I said, tucking it in my jacket.
"Going back to Tirellian, eh?"
"I saw you come aboard, so I got it ready. Just missed you at the
Captain's cabin. He was busy. Hollered out that I could catch you at
"It's chemically treated. It will stay in bloom for weeks."
I nodded. I was gone.
Up into the mountains now. Far. Far. The sky was a bucket of ice in
which no moons floated. The going became steeper, and the little
donkey protested. I whipped him with the throttle and went on. Up.
Up. I spotted a green, unwinking star, and felt a lump in my throat.
The encased rose beat against my chest like an extra heart. The donkey
brayed, long and loudly, then began to cough. I lashed him some more
and he died.
I threw the emergency brake on and got out. I began to walk.
So cold, so cold it grows. Up here. At night? Why? Why did she
do it? Why flee the campfire when night comes on?
And I was up, down, around, and through every chasm, gorge, and
pass, with my long-legged strides and an ease of movement never known
Barely two days remain, my love, and thou hast forsaken me. Why?
I crawled under overhangs. I leaped over ridges. I scraped my
knees, an elbow. I heard my jacket tear.
No answer, Malann? Do you really hate your people this much?
Then I'll try someone else. Vishnu, you're the Preserver. Preserve
her, please! Let me find her.
Adonis? Osiris? Thammuz? Manitou? Legba? Where is she?
I ranged far and high, and I slipped.
Stones ground underfoot and I dangled over an edge. My fingers so
cold. It was hard to grip the rock.
I looked down.
Twelve feet or so. I let go and dropped, landed rolling.
Then I heard her scream.
I lay there, not moving, looking up. Against the night, above, she
I lay still.
And she was gone.
I heard stones rattle and knew she was coming down some path to
the right of me.
I jumped up and ducked into the shadow of a boulder.
She rounded a cut-off, and picked her way, uncertainly, through
I stepped out and seized her by the shoulders.
She screamed again, then began to cry, crowding against me. It
was the first time I had ever heard her cry.
"Why?" I asked. "Why?"
But she only clung to me and sobbed.
Finally, "I thought you had killed yourself."
"Maybe I would have," I said. "Why did you leave Tirellian? And
"Didn't M'Cwyie tell you? Didn't you guess?"
"I didn't guess, and M'Cwyie said she didn't know."
"Then she lied. She knows."
"What? What is it she knows?"
She shook all over, then was silent for a long time. I realized
suddenly that she was wearing only her flimsy dancer's costume. I
pushed her from me, took off my jacket, and put it about her
"Great Malann!" I cried. "You'll freeze to death!"
"No," she said, "I won't."
I was transferring the rose-case to my pocket.
"What is that?" she asked.
"A rose," I answered. "You can't make it out in the dark. I once
compared you to one. Remember?"
"Yes--Yes. May I carry it?"
"Sure." I stuck it in the jacket pocket.
"Well? I'm still waiting for an explanation."
"You really do not know?" she asked.
"When the Rains came," she said, "apparently only our men were
affected, which was enough....Because I--wasn't--affected--apparently--"
"Oh," I said. "Oh."
We stood there, and I thought.
"Well, why did you run? What's wrong with being pregnant on Mars?
Tamur was mistaken. Your people can live again."
She laughed, again that wild violin played by a Paginini gone mad.
I stopped her before it went too far.
"How?" she finally asked, rubbing her cheek.
"Your people can live longer than ours. If our child is normal it
will mean our races can intermarry. There must still be other fertile
women of your race. Why not?"
"You have read the Book of Locar," she said, "and yet you ask me
that? Death was decided, voted upon, and passed, shortly after it
appeared in this form. But long before, before the followers of Locar
knew. They decided it long ago. `We have done all things,' they
said, 'we have seen all things, we have heard and felt all things.
The dance was good. Now let it end.'"
"You can't believe that."
"What I believe does not matter," she replied. "M'Cwyie and the
Mothers have decided we must die. Their very title is now a mockery,
but their decisions will be upheld. There is only one prophecy left,
and it is mistaken. We will die."
"No," I said.
"Come back with me, to Earth."
"All right, then. Come with me now."
"Back to Tirellian. I'm going to talk to the Mothers."
"You can't! There is a Ceremony tonight!"
"A Ceremony for a god who knocks you down, and then kicks you in
"He is still Malann," she answered. "We are still his people."
"You and my father would have gotten along fine," I snarled. "But
I am going, and you are coming with me, even if I have to carry
you--and I'm bigger than you are."
"But you are not bigger than Ontro."
"Who the hell is Ontro?"
"He will stop you, Gallinger. He is the Fist of Malann."
I scudded the jeepster to a halt in front of the only entrance I knew,
M'Cwyie's. Braxa, who had seen the rose in a headlamp, now cradled it
in her lap, like our child, and said nothing. There was a passive,
lovely look on her face.
"Are they in the Temple now?" I wanted to know.
The Madonna-expression did not change. I repeated the question.
"Yes," she said, from a distance, "but you cannot go in."
I circled and helped her down.
I led her by the hand, and she moved as if in a trance. In the
light of the new-risen moon, her eyes looked as they had the day I had
met her, when she had danced. I snapped my fingers. Nothing
So I pushed the door open and led her in. The room was
And she screamed for the third time that evening:
"Do not harm him, Ontro! It is Gallinger!"
I had never seen a Martian man before, only women. So I had no
way of knowing whether he was a freak, though I suspected it strongly.
I looked up at him.
His half-naked body was covered with moles and swellings. Gland
trouble, I guessed.
I had thought I was the tallest man on the planet, but he was
seven feet tall and overweight. Now I knew where my giant bed had
"Go back," he said. "She may enter. You may not."
"I must get my books and things."
He raised a huge left arm. I followed it. All my belonging lay
neatly stacked in the corner.
"I must go in. I must talk with M'Cwyie and the Mothers."
"You may not."
"The lives of your people depend on it."
"Go back," he boomed. "Go home to _your_ people, Gallinger.
My name sounded so different on his lips, like someone else's.
How old was he? I wondered. Three hundred? Four? Had he been a
Temple guardian all his life? Why? Who was there to guard against?
I didn't like the way he moved. I had seen men who moved like that
"Go back," he repeated.
If they had refined their martial arts as far as they had their
dances, or worse yet, if their fighting arts were a part of the dance,
I was in for trouble.
"Go on in," I said to Braxa. "Give the rose to M'Cwyie. Tell her
that I sent it. Tell her I'll be there shortly."
"I will do as you ask. Remember me on Earth, Gallinger.
I did not answer her, and she walked past Ontro and into the next
room, bearing her rose.
"Now will you leave?" he asked. "If you like, I will tell her
that we fought and you almost beat me, but I knocked you unconscious
and carried you back to your ship."
"No," I said, "either I go around you or go over you, but I am
He dropped into a crouch, arms extended.
"It is a sin to lay hands on a holy man," he rumbled, "but I will
stop you, Gallinger."
My memory was a fogged window, suddenly exposed to fresh air.
Things cleared. I looked back six years.
I was a student of the Oriental Languages at the University of
Tokyo. It was my twice-weekly night of recreation. I stood in a
thirty-foot circle in the Kodokan, the _judogi_ lashed about my high
hips by a brown belt. I was _Ik-kyu_, one notch below the lowest
degree of expert. A brown diamond above my right breast said
"Jiu-Jitsu" in Japanese, and it meant _atemiwaza_, really, because of
the one striking-technique I had worked out, found unbelievably
suitable to my size, and won matches with.
But I had never used it on a man, and it was five years since I
had practiced. I was out of shape, I knew, but I tried hard to force
my mind _tsuki no kokoro_, like the moon, reflecting the all of Ontro.
Somewhere, out of the past, a voice said "_Hajime_, let it begin."
I snapped into my _neko-ashi-dachi_ cat-stance, and his eyes
burned strangely. He hurried to correct his own position--and I threw
it at him!
My one trick!
My long left leg lashed up like a broken spring. Seven feet off
the ground my foot connected with his jaw as he tried to leap
His head snapped back and he fell. A soft moan escaped his lips.
_That's all there is to it,_ I thought. _Sorry, old fellow._
And as I stepped over him, somehow, groggily, he tripped me, and I
fell across his body. I couldn't believe he had strength enough to
remain conscious after that blow, let alone move. I hated to punish
him any more.
But he found my throat and slipped a forearm across it before I
realized there was a purpose to his action.
_No! Don't let it end like this!_
It was a bar of steel across my windpipe, my carotids. Then I
realized that he was still unconscious, and that this was a reflex
instilled by countless years of training. I had seen it happen once,
in _shiai_. The man had died because he had been choked unconscious
and still fought on, and his opponent thought he had not been applying
the choke properly. He tried harder.
But it was rare, so very rare!
I jammed my elbow into his ribs and threw my head back in his
face. The grip eased, but not enough. I hated to do it, but I
reached up and broke his little finger.
The arm went loose and I twisted free.
He lay there panting, face contorted. My heart went out to the
fallen giant, defending his people, his religion, following his
orders. I cursed myself as I had never cursed before, for walking
over him, instead of around.
I staggered across the room to my little heap of possessions. I
sat on the projector case and lit a cigarette.
I couldn't go into the Temple until I got my breath back, until I
thought of something to say.
How do you talk a race out of killing itself?
--Could it happen! Would it work that way? If I read them the
Book of Ecclesiastes--if I read them a greater piece of literature than
any Locar ever wrote--and as somber--and as pessimistic--and showed them
that our race had gone on despite one man's condemning all of life in
the highest poetry--showed them that the vanity he had mocked had borne
us to the Heavens--would they believe it--would they change their minds?
I ground out my cigarette on the beautiful floor, and found my
notebook. A strange fury rose within me as I stood.
And I walked into the Temple to preach the Black Gospel according
to Gallinger, from the Book of Life.
There was silence all about me.
M'Cwyie had been reading Locar, the rose set at her right hand,
target of all eyes.
Until I entered.
Hundreds of people were seated on the floor, barefoot. The few
men were as small as the women, I noted.
I had my boots on.
_Go all the way,_ I figured. _You either lose or you
A dozen crones sat in a semicircle behind M'Cwyie. The Mothers.
_The barren earth, the dry wombs, the fire-touched._
I moved to the table.
"Dying yourselves, you would condemn your people," I addressed
them, "that they may not know the life you have known--the joys, the
sorrows, the fullness. --But it is not true that you all must die." I
addressed the multitude now. "Those who say this lie. Braxa knows,
for she will bear a child--"
They sat there, like rows of Buddhas. M'Cwyie drew back into the
"--my child!" I continued, wondering what my father would have
thought of this sermon.
"...And all the women young enough may bear children. It is only
your men who are sterile. --And if you permit the doctors of the next
expedition to examine you, perhaps even the men may be helped. But if
they cannot, you can mate with the men of Earth.
"And ours is not an insignificant people, an insignificant place,"
I went on. "Thousands of years ago, the Locar of our world wrote a
book saying that it was. He spoke as Locar did, but we did not lie
down, despite plagues, wars, and famines. We did not die. One by one
we beat down the diseases, we fed the hungry, we fought the wars, and,
recently, have gone a long time without them. We may finally have
conquered them. I do not know.
"But we have crossed millions of miles of nothingness. We have
visited another world. And our Locar had said `Why bother? What is
the worth of it? It is all vanity, anyhow.'
"And the secret is," I lowered my voice, as at a poetry reading,
"he was right! It _is_ vanity, it _is_ pride! It is the hubris of
rationalism to always attack the prophet, the mystic, the god. It is
our blasphemy which has made us great, and will sustain us, and which
the gods secretly admire in us. --All the truly sacred names of God
are blasphemous things to speak!"
I was working up a sweat. I paused dizzily.
"Here is the Book of Ecclesiastes," I announced, and began:
"`Vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all
if vanity. What profit hath a man...'"
I spotted Braxa in the back, mute, rapt.
I wondered what she was thinking.
And I wound the hours of the night about me, like black thread on
Oh, it was late! I had spoken till day came, and still I spoke. I
finished Ecclesiastes and continued Gallinger.
And when I finished there was still only a silence.
The Buddhas, all in a row, had not stirred through the night. And
after a long while M'Cwyie raised her right hand. One by one the
Mothers did the same.
And I knew what that meant.
It meant, no, do not, cease, and stop.
It meant that I had failed.
I walked slowly from the room and slumped beside my baggage.
Ontro was gone. Good that I had not killed him....
After a thousand years M'Cwyie entered.
She said, "Your job is finished."
I did not move.
"The prophecy is fulfilled," she said. "My people are rejoicing.
You have won, holy man. Now leave us quickly."
My mind was a deflated balloon. I pumped a little air back into
"I'm not a holy man," I said, "just a second-rate poet with a bad
case of hubris."
I lit my last cigarette.
Finally, "All right, what prophecy?"
"The Promise of Locar," she replied, as though the explaining were
unnecessary, "that a holy man would come from the Heavens to save us
in our last hours, if all the dances of Locar were completed. He
would defeat the Fist of Malann and bring us life."
"As with Braxa, and as the example in the Temple."
"You read us his words, as great as Locar's. You read to us how
there is `nothing new under the sun.' And you mocked his words as you
read them--showing us a new thing.
"There has never been a flower on Mars," she said, "but we will
learn to grow them.
"You are the Sacred Scoffer," she finished.
"He-Who-Must-Mock-in-the-Temple--you go shod on holy ground."
"But you voted `no,'" I said.
"I voted not to carry out our original plan, and to let Braxa's
child live instead."
"Oh." The cigarette fell from my fingers. How close it had been!
How little I had known!
"She was chosen half a Process ago to do the dances--to wait for
"But she said that Ontro would stop me."
M'Cwyie stood there for a long time.
"She had never believed the prophecy herself. Things are not well
with her now. She ran away, fearing it was true. When you completed
it, and we voted, she knew."
"Then she does not love me? Never did?"
"I am sorry, Gallinger. It was the one part of her duty she never
"Duty," I said flatly....Dutydutyduty! Tra-la!
"She has said good-bye, she does wish to see you again.
"...and we will never forget your teachings," she added.
"Don't," I said automatically, suddenly knowing the great paradox
which lies at the heart of all miracles. I did not believe a word of
my own gospel, never had.
I stood, like a drunken man, and muttered "M'narra."
I went outside, into my last day on Mars.
_I have conquered thee, Malann--and the victory is thine! Rest
easy on thy starry bed. God damned!_
I left the jeepster there and walked back to the _Aspic_, leaving
the burden of life so many footsteps behind me. I went to my cabin,
locked the door, and took forty-four sleeping pills.
But when I awakened I was in the dispensary, and alive.
I felt the throb of engines as I slowly stood up and somehow made
it to the port.
Blurred Mars hung like a swollen belly above me, until it
dissolved, brimmed over, and streamed down my face.